Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Glenn Island Descriptive Writing Unit 4

One day, I met my sister and we decided to go to an island. We saw golden sand and a blue sky.We went home together with my family and we ate our delicious dinner in the night. We lived in a little house. I smelt a fresh coconut. I ate the coconut. I smelt fresh air. I tasted salty water. I felt rough sand and I heard people eating quietly. The island was beautiful surrounded by water. There were many beautiful tall trees like coconut trees. I like to play with horse. In the morning, my sister and I played on the beach. We swam in the blue sea.We built sand castle. I heard bird chirping. I love to stay on the island.

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  1. nice Glenn, I really feel it . - Meilia -

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  2. Nice descriptive writing Glenn. Keep it going Glenn ! - Lourdes -

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  3. Nice island descriptive writing Glenn -Audie-

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  4. Good Glenn! Oh by the way I am Sam, this is my actual account so I don't need to write my name.

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