Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Meilia Desert descriptive writing unit4



DESERT
As I walked into my desert diorama ,I could see yellow rocks ,the yellow rocks made my eyes hurt.
Then , I tried to eat the sharp cactus ,I screamed URLTL!!! It felt like I’d eaten a SAW!!!!
The desert was as hot as the sun !!!
The cluttered sands were really really hot.
Then ,I smelt the camel’s stinks ,it made me want to throwup!!!
After that ,I rode on the camel’s back . I went to see the giant cactus.The giant cactus was ginormous! 
Then ,I touched the prickly sand on the floor. A wushing sound came to my ear ,it was the wind!!
The step sounds from the camel were really loud!
As I walked to the food center ,I felt really hungry.

Then, I ate an scrambled ostrich egg and I drank clear water.                                                                                       After that,I went back to school and I am really happy that I’d been in my own diorama.

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