Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Nathalie seaside descriptive writing unit 4

                                              Diorama descriptive writing




As I walked into the sea , I saw a tiny sand lying in the beach, Like a dough fell onto a floor . When I looked up a blazing sun shone through my eyes! It was as bright as a light shining upon me. When I wanted to buy a pure coconut I saw a group of boats and harbor like a lush forest. I could see lots of fishermen's fishing in the sea! The seaside was a bustling place, a crowded place like a carnival! One time my stomach was very hungry and very very thirsty, So I agreed to buy a pure, fresh, tropical juice and I could eat a freshly cooked seafood. It was as fresh as cold, breezy, pure, water. after I ate seafood, I bought a freshly squeezed lemonade . I could smell pure, clean, fresh air . I felt overjoyed.



                             


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