Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Audie desert descriptive writing unit 4





      Once upon a  time , as I walked  into  my desert diorama , I saw parched  sand on the floor. As I took  of  my shoes  and  I  touched the  parched  sand , suddenly  I  shouted  " HOOOOOOTT...........!". Then  I put  on  my shoes  again. Then I  put  on  my shoes again.  Then  I  bumped  unto  a  giant  cactus. I  bellowed  " OOOOOOOOWW! " .  My  hand  was  bleeding. It  was  as sun-drenched  as  hell. I  ate the  pointed  cactus  and  it  make  me  ULRLT.......... . It was like  I'd  eaten  a  SAW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I  saw  some    circular  houses  from  miles  to  miles. I  met  a  new  friend  named  Sam. I  smelt  some  stinky  camels. The  stinky  camels  made  me  sick. Sam  my  friend  from  the  house  smelt   like  stinky  camels  too! He made  me  sick  because  he  always  ride  a  camel. The  dusty  air  made  me  QWERTYUIOPASDFGHJKLZXCVNM< > ENTER. My  friend  let  me  taste  the  stinky  camel's  meat.  It  taste  very  YUCK!!!.Then he grabbed  me  a  clear  water  from a cactus  from  KING  ZAVADA  but  100,000  of  bottles  wouldn't  help!!!!!!!!. Why?. It  was  a  baking  hot  desert. It  means  SUPER HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that's  why  it's  a  peaceful  place. I felt  the  pointed  and  jagged  cactus. I  heard  camel  stomping  but  it  is  also  a  quiet  stomping. I  felt  happy  about  the  journey  in  my  desert  diorama. I  got out of  the  box. 


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