Aurel Mountain & Volcano descriptive writing Unit 4

Diorama Description

I Imagine I was on a snow-capped mountain. On the snow-capped mountain I could see crusty snow, white woolly clouds and spikey grass. I also could see mountains as tall as a tower. Far-far away I could see a volcano exploding, the land had rocky soil. I could smell as hot as red, pizza. I could see green grass as green as pear. I could  hear wild animals sounds, the sounds were as noisy as the jungle. The mountain was as quite as the library. I was too scared too climb up the mountain because it’s to quite, and there was lots of wild animals. In the volcano I could hear booming lava and people screaming. People were screaming as loud as is there was a fire. On the mountain, I could smell as fresh air. I also could hear steaming water dust from the volcano. I could feel  soft snow  like a cotton. I could feel spiked grass. I could taste coconuts as yummy as milk then, I could taste apple as crunchy as chirps also I could taste fish. 

 

Shanti Desert descriptive writing unit 4

  The Amazing Desert

One bracing sandstorm day, sand was fiercely blowing up my nose. The camel’s stench was appalling. In the desert I nibbled a mouthful of cacti and ostrich eggs and it was scrumptious!  I felt the sweltering sand, and the coarse pyramid and scorching heat. And all the cacti had prickly thorns. I heard the sandstorm whistling in my ears, and people screaming, “I need water!” I saw the plunging pyramid, and I also saw the blue sky as blue as the Earth!

By: Shanti 3L

 

Owen desert descriptive writing

Desert

When I walked into the desert, I was sweating as much as a tap water running. I couldn’t find water in the desert. So I was burning in the middle of the desert searching for water. I touched and pick out the sharp spiky cactus. The spikes were as sharp as a sharks tooth. The plunging mountains and pyramids were as tall as the tallest skyscraper in the world. There was a person shouting for water on top of the plunging mountain. The desert was barren because there were no plants. An eagle was hunting for food like hunter hunting animals in the jungle or forest. The birds were dying of the heat in the desert sky and it is near the sun so it is so hot like hell. 

Ravell mountain diorama descriptive writing Unit 4

Mountain

 Ones upon a time, there was this towering mountain in the middle of a forest on an island. I saw this huge lake at the bottom of the mountain and if you see up in the sky a lots of white woolly clouds but if you see up at the top you can see lots and lots of crumbly snow and tones of parched rock/soil. I smell very clean air at the to the bottom of the mountain, grass, leaf and fragrant flower. I hear very laud boulders rolling fast down the mountain. I taste burning steak on my mouth, frozen ice and icy water...

I feel smooth ice and icy crumbly freezing snow yay...